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« Reply #15 on: March 02, 2010, 12:24:31 PM »

So as i see it, this is how it should be.

Jutsu's: 1. Suna No Tate http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shield_of_Sand/http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sphere_of_Sand
            2. Suna No Jutsu http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Armor_of_Sand
            3. Sabaku Kyū http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Binding_Coffin

Suna No Tate should be a defensive technique, as Gaara is a defensive character. Except from his Shukaku use.
Gaara forms a shield around him, making him unable to move. His only weapon in this state is Sand Arrows, shooting out of his sphere or whatever he is in. Because of the 3rd person view he can see outside, but to make it more realistic you can have Third Eye jutsu spawn outside the sphere, this or make his sphere be open in the front like it the first link.

Sand arrows are thrown shot like shurikens but will only deal damage (Not too much tough)and will cost chakra. There will be 3 ways to make this shield go away. 1st, the user's chakra becomes empty. 2nd, Somone breaks with a finisher jutsu, Chidori, Rasengan and such. 3rd, the time is up.

After the shield is removed, there will be a decent cooldown, in order to prevent spamming.

Suna No Jutsu is a technique where Gaara does a jutsu. Afterwards sand will begin to surround Gaara's feet. The effect is that his melee becomes mid-ranged or atleast he can hit from a bit farther away. The sand stretches and hits the opponent This lasts for a limited amount of time.

Sabaku Kyū is where Gaara has to be close to an enemy and execute the jutsu. This will engulf the enemy in sand, afterwards it starts levitating and later it explodes.

An idea for the above: Gaara has to charge the jutsu up fully as this is often used as a sure-kill technique. Also, it would be hard to charge the jutsu close to an enemy so he should be able to charge anywhere, leap across the room with sand around his hands and then hit the enemy. The first does not have to implemented.

btw, it would be cool if you made it that the sand does everything for Gaara, like attacking, defending. And he when he got hit and "auto-blocks" he does not get pushed backwards. And Gaara's arms should be crossed when attacking, standing still. But not when he runs and such.

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It would be cool that you change some of the above with this:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimately_Hard_Absolute_Defense:_Shield_of_Shukaku

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimately_Hard_Absolute_Attack:_Spear_of_Shukaku

It would be cool with the last one as it is Gaara's "true" strongest attack.

I don't know if this post was necessary or not. Well, if it was, give ideas or correct me on things.






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« Reply #16 on: March 02, 2010, 02:55:30 PM »

I think the weapon Jutsu would be interesting. The big fat guy one, though, would look kind of funny.

It's going to be really hard to make Gaara balanced. I don't think Gaara should have two sand Jutsu, though... maybe Gaara only has two Jutsu in all? I don't know...  Lips Sealed
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« Reply #17 on: March 03, 2010, 02:59:46 AM »

Well, he's got more jutsu, check out this site.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Gaara

He's got many jutsu's, i guess i weren't good finding the best ones Angry

There are some nice wave attacks tough, like
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Quicksand_in_the_Style_of_a_Waterfall
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Prison_Sand_Burial
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Imperial_Funeral
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« Reply #18 on: March 08, 2010, 05:25:06 AM »

Hah gaara can be balanced Cheesy I have some good Ideas ... may be he has a special ability THe sand sheeld (that means blocking 30% of the dmg done .. or so) sand coffin (grabs enemy in the air and takes dmg . can be canceled if gaara is hit...) And something like that but gaara has to have lower hp after all the first time he was hit in his life was when he fought Lee Just Idea .. I cant think  of balanced 3rd jutsu Cheesy right now .. this idea came to me just now so dont get mad at me if I said something stupid Cheesy:D:D:D Tongue
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« Reply #19 on: March 08, 2010, 08:09:53 AM »

putting him in wouldnt be too hard Smiley
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« Reply #20 on: March 08, 2010, 08:54:16 AM »

So by balancing him more it would probably to lower his hp and raise his chakra. His Sabaku Kyū should clearly be his 3rd jutsu.

So, it would be cool for someone to have a AoE attack.

So,

Jutsu's: 1. Suna no Tate http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shield_of_Sand with http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Third_Eye
            2. Ryūsa Bakuryū http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Funeral]http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Quicksand_in_the_Style_of_a_Waterfall[/url
            or [url]http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Funeral
/ http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Imperial_Funeral
            3. Sabaku Kyū http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Binding_Coffin

1. Suna No Tate is a shield that makes Gaara invulnerable and unable to move for a period of time. This shield will
    drain Chakra. The shield could have an opening in front or spawn a Third Eye automatically(Just to make it realistic). The
    only weapon Gaara has in this state is to fire Sand Arrows. The shield can be broken by finishing jutsu's such as Chidori,
    Rasengan and Chakra Concentration. It can also have a time limit on how long you can hold it and it will disappear if your
    chakra is empty. If the shield is broken by someone, Gaara will be stunned for a short amount of time.

2. Ryūsa Bakuryū is an attack where Gaara sends a small tsunami against the enemy. This is just a wave attack and
    damages all who touches it. I haven't got anything else.

3. Sabaku Kyū is the trademark ability of Gaara. It should be made that he has to charge the jutsu and get up to his
    enemy and use it. Sand starts to surround the opponent faster and faster, catches the enemy and he starts levitating
    followed by a boom. The enemy and sand falls on the ground. As mentioned before, it could keep doing damage until
    Gaara is damaged, or it could be like other finisher jutsu's, the more you charge it, the more it damages.

A constant sand protection would be nice tough. It could protect against 30% of the damage he takes (Except Chidori's and such of course). And instead of losing hp, he loses a bit chakra.
   

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« Reply #21 on: March 08, 2010, 02:52:29 PM »

I made a post with ideas and I added gaara .. its only for a special passive ability for every char Tongue
feel free to chek and post something inside Tongue I posted my sand sheld idea for gaara there too Smiley

http://naiteki-kensei.com/forum/suggestions/some-special-passive-abilites/
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« Reply #22 on: March 08, 2010, 05:50:57 PM »

putting him in wouldnt be too hard Smiley

Not with your magic spells it won't!  Cool
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« Reply #23 on: March 10, 2010, 11:49:32 AM »

If we ever do garaa my opinion on him is this;

He'll have normal chakra, health, stamina. He should have his auto defense, which is a big plus. THen his weakness is that he moves really slowly. Once he attacks (jutsus) his defense is gone and then u can hurt him and he'll take the damage for example two times harder then a different char . That would balance him out perfectly imo
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« Reply #24 on: March 10, 2010, 11:54:18 AM »

If we ever do garaa my opinion on him is this;

He'll have normal chakra, health, stamina. He should have his auto defense, which is a bug +. THen his - is that he moves really slowly. Once he attacks (jutsus) his defense is gone and then u can hurt him and he'll take the damage for example two times harder then a different char . That would balance him out perfectly imo

That's sounds simply awesome.
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« Reply #25 on: March 10, 2010, 06:39:51 PM »

That's sounds simply awesome.

Double kill!

Tenken is on a roll!

(that means I agree with Didgy btw)
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« Reply #26 on: March 10, 2010, 07:16:12 PM »

just like zargogosmile i too think alot of how garaa should be put in-game
what do you think of this suggestion:

-garaa's hp should be 35% less then other characters
  -reason: since he never felt pain, one punch without defence should hurt him more then other characters-
-trowing kunai's at garaa won't effect him at all
  -reason: it's true to the show that's where his ultimate defence kicks in
-normal melee has no effect either
  -reason: that's where sakura will have the advantage with her powerpunch!
                                                  sasuke will have the advantage with his chidori
                                                  naruto will have the advantage with his rasengan
                                                  kakashi will have the advantage with his raikiri

-when garaa's hit with kunai tag or tags will give the opponents 4sec. the chance to attack him with weapons tai- or ninjutsu
  -reason: defence is down all attacks possible within 4sec!
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« Reply #27 on: March 10, 2010, 09:25:51 PM »

just like zargogosmile i too think alot of how garaa should be put in-game
what do you think of this suggestion:

-garaa's hp should be 35% less then other characters
  -reason: since he never felt pain, one punch without defence should hurt him more then other characters-
-trowing kunai's at garaa won't effect him at all
  -reason: it's true to the show that's where his ultimate defence kicks in
-normal melee has no effect either
  -reason: that's where sakura will have the advantage with her powerpunch!
                                                  sasuke will have the advantage with his chidori
                                                  naruto will have the advantage with his rasengan
                                                  kakashi will have the advantage with his raikiri

-when garaa's hit with kunai tag or tags will give the opponents 4sec. the chance to attack him with weapons tai- or ninjutsu
  -reason: defence is down all attacks possible within 4sec!


Perhaps make some changes? The Kunai idea isn't bad as long as his HP is lowered.
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« Reply #28 on: March 10, 2010, 09:47:34 PM »

share ur thoughts..
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« Reply #29 on: March 11, 2010, 02:03:58 AM »


-normal melee has no effect either
  -reason: that's where sakura will have the advantage with her powerpunch!
                                                  sasuke will have the advantage with his chidori
                                                  naruto will have the advantage with his rasengan
                                                  kakashi will have the advantage with his raikiri



What about Lee? He has normal melee only. I've put an idea of Gaara's sand defence in my thread, where he can block certain amount of hits per sec.
And I like the idea of lowered HP

EDIT: Oops... forgot to post a link Wink
http://naiteki-kensei.com/forum/suggestions/character's-unique-stats/
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